The given pie chart gives information about the primary reasons that people came to and left the UK in 2007.
It is noticeable that the main factor influencing
this
decision was employment.
The biggest percentage is Definite jobs in immigration, with about 30% and in emigration significantly less, at 29%. The second large pie is the Formal study of immigration. But this
figure is a very small number in migration, accounting for 4%. Accompany showed third big proportion less than a fifth. By contrast
, this
pie considerably less, at 13%. Looking for work, No reason stated and others showed lower figures, at 12%, 6% and 11%. But this
proportion was significantly large, at 22%, 18% and 14% respectively.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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