In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement

Some
people
say that nobody will ever buy printed
newspaper
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or books again in the future because they will be able to read everything and searching anything online for free. I agree with
this
statement because in the future as technology
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,
rapidly
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there is so much we can take especially reading and searching
news
online without paying. As technology goes rapidly, so
does
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the benefits they are provided from using it. Obviously,
people
surfing the internet looking for something are gaining more and more now.
For example
,
people
that like reading any kind of
news
but are too busy to get out to buy
newspaper
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and magazines, can easily be updated with
much
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hot
news
with only one click on their mobile phone. It is much more efficient especially in time, saving their energy compared with going outside to buy printed
newspaper
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and
also
they do not have to spend any cost because they can get it for free.
Secondly
, they can
also
access the
news
outside their region, unlike the physical
newspaper
or books which are unlimited and only fill with specific topics.
This
way is beneficial for several
people
who are looking for
news
outside their country, so they will be updated with anything that happens there without having to try harder like flying abroad to just only bought the
newspaper
.
Furthermore
,
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college student is getting a lot of benefit from
this
development of technology too. They can read a lot of information related to the course that will be examined online,
thus
making their knowledge expand
further
. In conclusion, I believe that
this
phenomenon is more likely to give a lot of benefits other than its drawback. Much more beneficial because not only it is more efficient, but
also
individuals can access and reach everything they want to know for free in unlimited times even
that
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is something outside their region.
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  • Technological advancements
  • Digital content
  • Environmental concerns
  • Tactile experience
  • Production costs
  • Distribution costs
  • Digital divide
  • Digital fatigue
  • Print media
  • Credibility
  • Permanence
  • Collectibility
  • Aesthetic value
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