Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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recent time,the environmental problem is more
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critical
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of specific
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of plants and animals .
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,some individuals argue that
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of species is more essential rather than environmental problems.I totally agree with the statements.
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, we know that all
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of creatures,wildlife including plants are destroyed
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numerous reasons which is good for the ecosystem.One of them is
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natural disaster and human-made.So, some people believe that
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is the main cause of
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problem
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because
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cannot
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, if these creations do not exist,what humans eat so they cannot survive.
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example,
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hydrogen bombing in the ocean
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multiple species have lost.
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,
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disagree with the idea which is mentioned above,there is
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enviromental
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environmental
issues is the humans created activities.
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instance,the generation of energy produces
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the burning of petrol in
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large amount for cars and the
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packaging
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new roads by cutting down
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trees.In
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global warming dramatically increased. in conclusion, we have many environmental troubles we should preserve our nature, not
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try to affect the habitats and take care of our surroundings for a better future life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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