The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year.
The given bar graph displays the rate of Australian
water
consumption in certain cities for a year in a particular period of time (last
year), while
the pie chart depicts the percentage of the distribution consuming water
in several sectors of Australia last
year (2014).
By and large, it is evident that Perth was the city that utilize much water
among others, while
Canberra was the least. Moreover
, much water
was allocated for the Agriculture field. Meanwhile, Mining was the less.
Looking into detail, it is evident that the average Water
consumption for Perth peaked at 300 Kilolitre the highest in the given period of time, followed by Brisbane and Adelaide, accounting for 250 Kilolitre and around 248 respectively. Sydney and Melbourne only contributed 200 and 150 correspondingly. In addition
, the least consumption was Canberra only donated nearly 147 Kilolitre.
Furthermore
, the proportion of water
distribution for Agriculture was greater, accounting for 67 %. However
, the Household just stated at 9 %. Moreover
, Electricity and Gas Supply also
water
supply, sewage and drainage shared the same ratio of 7 %. Similarly
, Manufacturing donated as much as other industries for 4 %. Nonetheless
, Mining was the least in which water
was distributed , only giving 2 % of the total.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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