The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps illustrate changes before and after an

island

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before it was developed.

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, by comparing the two figures some trees were removed. Some areas still remain, and some buildings like

houses

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, restaurants and reception were built. By comparing the west side of the

island

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trees still remain, and around them some

houses

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were built for using accommodation for tourists,

also

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some footpaths were constructed to show the way.

Beside

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Besides

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those

houses

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a restaurant and a reception were built and with a vehicle track they were connected to each other, a restaurant was built

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apply

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northwest of the

island

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however

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,however

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this

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area had been empty before that. On the east side of the

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island

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,island

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some trees had just been cut. In the south of the

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island

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,island

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Pler was constructed.

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, nearly in the

center

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centre

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of the

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island

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,island

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some

houses

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were constructed that are more than those

were

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that were

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built

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the west side.

Moreover

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, to connect those

houses

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to each other, footpaths were built.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, houses with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

164 words

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