The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate changes before and after an
island
before it was developed.
Overall
, by comparing the two figures some trees were removed. Some areas still remain, and some buildings like houses
, restaurants and reception were built.
By comparing the west side of the island
trees still remain, and around them some houses
were built for using accommodation for tourists, also
some footpaths were constructed to show the way. Beside
those Replace the word
Besides
houses
a restaurant and a reception were built and with a vehicle track they were connected to each other, a restaurant was built in
northwest of the Change preposition
apply
island
, however
Add a comma
,however
this
area had been empty before that.
On the east side of the island
some trees had just been cut. In the south of the Add a comma
,island
island
Pler was constructed. Add a comma
,island
Also
, nearly in the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
island
some Add a comma
,island
houses
were constructed that are more than those were
built Correct pronoun usage
that were
in
the west side. Change preposition
on
Moreover
, to connect those houses
to each other, footpaths were built.Submitted by shahab_e2020 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, houses with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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