Q: SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT EVENTUALLY ALL JOBS WILL BE DONE BY ARTIFICIALLY INTELLIGENT ROBOTS. WHAT IS YOUR OPINION?

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These days with the advent of new technologies

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as AI, a lot of people have lost their businesses and have been replaced by them. Someone may say that

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process will continue, resulting in the loose of all the

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others say that there are professions that only living humans can do. I agree with the latter opinion and process

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view in

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essay. Most importantly, professions dealing with feelings are difficult to be managed by AI. It is a privilege for human beings to be moved, shocked or angry and needless to say, those emotions can not be understood by artificially made things.

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as mental counsellors can not be replaced.

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is because there are no patterns or concrete solutions that can be applied to a mental problem. Problems regarding sentiments are always different and so the solutions are uncountable like stars. It is impossible for AI to deal with it using a pattern programmed previously.

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, someone may say that if we give all the accumulated information about a job, AI will be able to run the work. I agree to some extent but the more

jobs

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AI steals, the more

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people will nurture. AI is special in that it can use effectively all the past information.

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, it is unable to make new things because it lacks creativity.

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, only humans are able to make innovations and innovative

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can not be replaced by humans. In conclusion, AI will never replace all

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because it can not understand feelings and give birth to innovations.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Artificially Intelligent (AI)
Automation
Job displacement
Human empathy
Creativity
Intuition
Repetitive tasks
Economic implications
Government regulation
Job opportunities
Human labor
Job market
Acquire skills
Human-AI collaboration
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Q: SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT EVENTUALLY ALL JOBS WILL BE DONE BY ARTIFICIALLY INTELLIGENT ROBOTS. WHAT IS YOUR OPINION?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

1.1 ) The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Despite better access to education, many adults today still can not read or write. In what ways are they disadvantaged?

In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

More and more people these days work harder and longer hours and have no time for family life and friends. What are the causes in your opinion for this? How is it affecting family life and the society as a whole?