Q: SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT EVENTUALLY ALL JOBS WILL BE DONE BY ARTIFICIALLY INTELLIGENT ROBOTS. WHAT IS YOUR OPINION?

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These days with the advent of new technologies

such

as AI, a lot of people have lost their businesses and have been replaced by them. Someone may say that

this

process will continue, resulting in the loose of all the

jobs

While

others say that there are professions that only living humans can do. I agree with the latter opinion and process

this

view in

this

essay. Most importantly, professions dealing with feelings are difficult to be managed by AI. It is a privilege for human beings to be moved, shocked or angry and needless to say, those emotions can not be understood by artificially made things.

For example

jobs

such

as mental counsellors can not be replaced.

This

is because there are no patterns or concrete solutions that can be applied to a mental problem. Problems regarding sentiments are always different and so the solutions are uncountable like stars. It is impossible for AI to deal with it using a pattern programmed previously.

On the other hand

, someone may say that if we give all the accumulated information about a job, AI will be able to run the work. I agree to some extent but the more

jobs

AI steals, the more

works

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people will nurture. AI is special in that it can use effectively all the past information.

However

, it is unable to make new things because it lacks creativity.

Therefore

, only humans are able to make innovations and innovative

jobs

can not be replaced by humans. In conclusion, AI will never replace all

jobs

because it can not understand feelings and give birth to innovations.

Submitted by leokuwayama03 on Wed Jun 21 2023

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Q: SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT EVENTUALLY ALL JOBS WILL BE DONE BY ARTIFICIALLY INTELLIGENT ROBOTS. WHAT IS YOUR OPINION?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Car ownership has increased rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that goverment should make it free for all student no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that elders should be cared at home with family members. Others think that they should be kept at nursing homes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say that public libraries are an important public resource and should be free. Others say that they are just a waste of public money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that countries should produce foods their population eats and import less food as much as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?