Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, most young
people
tend to cohabit before they get married because they think it brings many benefits for them. Personally, I completely agree with
this
statement for many reasons. There are various reasons young
people
shouldn't cohabit before marriage.
Firstly
, moving in together before marriage can not be accepted by their parents.
Furthermore
, they will have
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with their family members. Because parents always worry about their children's safety when they leave their house and cohabit with their
lover
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.
Secondly
, when
cohabitation
will make them have many conflicts
due to
not having the same viewpoint,
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, religious convictions, etc which can lead to
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up early. The important reason is the public condemnation and social stigma.
For example
, in VietNam, cohabiting women typically risk social stigma and loss of respect from their loved ones.
However
, I think
people
can try
cohabitation
when they decide to get married. In modern life, non-marriage
cohabitation
is not illegal, they can choose
cohabitation
to make the best decision. When living in a couple, both
people
will reduce
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burden.
Besides
, they can understand each other better about their personalities,
interests
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or they give each other companionship and care.
Cohabitation
also
reduces the risk of divorce after getting married for young
people
because they have the process of learning and living together for a long time so they will make the most informed decision to get married. In conclusion, I believe that
cohabitation
will bring many benefits for young
people
before they decide to get married
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