The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart illustrates the details of how
sugar
is produced from sugar
cane
.
Overall
, this
linear process involves seven main stages during which ripe sugar
cane
is harvested, then
its juice is extracted, refined and sugar
is obtained as the final product. Although
the process is mainly automated, the harvesting stage can be done both by means of special machines and manually.
In the beginning, sugar
cane
is allowed to grow for at least one year or a year and a half, after which the raw material is collected and sent to the crushing stage, where hard particles of sugar
cane
are separated from the juice. Afterwards, the juice is purified by passing through a limestone filter and heated to become syrup in the evaporator.
The sixth stage is aimed at separating crystallised sugar
from syrup via the
centrifuge. In the end, Correct article usage
apply
sugar
is dried, cooled and stored in large barrels.Submitted by vlad.chibisov on
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