In spite of the advancements made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

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In
this
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world, agriculture is having a major advantage from time to time, yet, There are still some people that cannot have access to
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. Using
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essay, I would like to give my point of view on the problem and the answer to solving the
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issue.
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production in
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world is tremendous, the distribution of
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food
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is not equal. Several
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that
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as rich
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are having easier access to
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by having more cash to buy and a better climate to produce the raw ingredients.
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, some unlucky nations still struggle with their wealth and climate,
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they cannot
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or buy the
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foods
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.
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, several African regions are struggling with their hot weather and cannot harvest the basic ingredients. These problems becoming more complex
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they do not have the money to import the
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they need.
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my view, to solve the problem, we need to distribute
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equally to all nations. Rich
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tend to produce massive amounts of
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waste,
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several African
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still starving. With a better distribution, the price and demand of
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can be more appropriate and
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makes the price cheaper to the poor
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. As an illustration, Indonesia currently has a policy to distribute
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in more appropriate ways, and
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, they will charge people who throw the
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. The money that serves
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penalty will be collected for having a subsidy to the poor provinces. In conclusion,
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agriculture is having a fast pace development, there are peoples that still suffers
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unequal
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distribution.
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, to tackle these problems, people need to be aware of their
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waste and distribute the
food
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equally.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • logistical
  • economic barriers
  • imbalance
  • exacerbates
  • food wastage
  • retailer levels
  • trade policies
  • agricultural subsidies
  • infrastructure
  • sustainable farming practices
  • international cooperation
  • fair-trade agreements
  • community-based
  • precision agriculture
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