In spite of the advancements made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?
In
this
world, agriculture is having a major advantage from time to time, yet, There are still some people that cannot have access to food
. Using this
essay, I would like to give my point of view on the problem and the answer to solving the food
issue.
Although
food
production in this
world is tremendous, the distribution of the
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food
is not equal. Several countries
that labelled
as rich Add a missing verb
are labelled
countries
are having easier access to foods
by having more cash to buy and a better climate to produce the raw ingredients. However
, some unlucky nations still struggle with their wealth and climate, therefore
they cannot produced
or buy the Change the verb form
be produced
produce
foods
. Fix the agreement mistake
food
For example
, several African regions are struggling with their hot weather and cannot harvest the basic ingredients. These problems becoming more complex due to
they do not have the money to import the foods
they need.
According to
my view, to solve the problem, we need to distribute food
equally to all nations. Rich countries
tend to produce massive amounts of food
waste, while
on the other
hand
several African Add a comma
,hand
countries
still starving. With a better distribution, the price and demand of foods
can be more appropriate and hence
makes the price cheaper to the poor countries
. As an illustration, Indonesia currently has a policy to distribute foods
in more appropriate ways, and in addition
, they will charge people who throw the foods
. The money that servesFix the agreement mistake
food
a
penalty will be collected for having a subsidy to the poor provinces.
In conclusion, Change preposition
as a
while
agriculture is having a fast pace development, there are peoples that still suffers due to
unequal food
distribution. However
, to tackle these problems, people need to be aware of their food
waste and distribute the food
equally.Submitted by nadiasyifaa on
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