The pie chart shows amount of sailing things in Australia between 2005 to 2010.

The two pie charts compare four categories of

categories of

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America

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saling

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sales

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percentage retail sector (electronics & furnishings,

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video

games) from 2005 to 2010.Units are measured

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percentage

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. It is noticeable that the proportion of electronics &

appliance

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and home furnishings experienced a significant fall over the

5 year

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period

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figure for food & beverage and

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rise. In 2005, 35% of

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average

America

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sectors

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rate went on the electronics &

appliance

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which was the largest pie

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the

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chart,

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, by 2010, the figure for

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category had fallen by 30 %. During a

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, the demand for home furnishings of

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online retail sector experienced a considerable fall from 25 % to 15 %.In

term

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of

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sailing

saling

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selling

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category made up 22 % in 2005 and after 5

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this

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sharp

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increase

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32% making it the largest retail

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