Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet and they can study just as well at home. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
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schooling is not essential and a child can learn everything either from the web or at their house. I completely disagree Unnecessary verb
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with
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notion. Hereby, I will provide arguments a long
with relevant examples to support my stance.
Out of all the Correct your spelling
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reasons the strongest to support my stand is that schools have logically and sequentially arranged Correct your spelling
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syllabus
which not only Fix the agreement mistake
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help
to clear the basic concepts but Change the verb form
helps
also
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a better
about
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This
is especially important for clearing competitive exams. For instance
, NEET-UG, JEE-MAINS and ADVANCE. Besides
this
, the school goers
develop concepts and emotions of team spirit, kindness, Correct your spelling
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friendship
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and friendship
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the ability
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in to
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This
is significantly necessary as a kid who stays for so long in a
same conducive environment tends to face psychiatric problems. Correct article usage
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For example
, anxiousness in a new surroundings
, separation anxiety from the caregiver. Correct the article-noun agreement
new surroundings
a new surrounding
Furthermore
, the centre of learning bring
young ones from Change the verb form
brings
the
different religions side by side which Correct article usage
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incorporate
the feeling of secularism in them. It is predominantly important in a country full of religious diversity Correct subject-verb agreement
incorporates
such
as India.
On the contrary
, people argue that millions of articles and videos regarding each and every topic is available on internet
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the internet
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Apart from
this
, most students have home tutors and guardians to look after their studies. This
method of education is favoured in certain countries like Fiji and PNG.
To conclude
, we can stay
that despite the availability of varied videos and texts online, Correct your spelling
say
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a developmental
milestone
achieved by the pupils going to school would be far better. Fix the agreement mistake
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Therefore
, I completely oppose the idea of home schooling
.Correct your spelling
homeschooling
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