The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates changes in the costs of
copper
,
nickel
and
zinc
in comparison to the previous
month
in 2014.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the prices of metals tended to rise during the winter
months
whereas
they showed the opposite in the summer. It is
also
worth noting that
nickel
has the most dynamic pattern compared to the remaining metals. In January,
nickel
had the biggest change in price with a 6% increase
while
the figures for
copper
and
zinc
were 2% and 1% respectively. The cost of
nickel
then
continue to ascend by around 1% per
month
until declined by 3% in June.
Likewise
,
copper
experienced a relatively similar trend, growing by between 0.5% and 2% in the first 4
months
and
then
falling by 0.5% in both May and June.
In contrast
, the statistics of
zinc
peaked at 3% in February, followed by a plunge to -3% in June. In the remaining period, the
nickel
’s price witnessed a -1% change in 3 successive
months
but later climbed by 1% in the 2 final
months
.
However
, the figure for
copper
remained much more stable, ranging from 0.5% to 1%. At the same time, the cost of
zinc
decreased by 0.5% each
month
between July and September, after which it underwent a 2% growth in the
last
month
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, zinc, month, months with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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