The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates changes in the costs of
copper
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,
nickel
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and
zinc
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in comparison to the previous
month
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in 2014.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the prices of metals tended to rise during the winter
months
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whereas
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they showed the opposite in the summer. It is
also
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worth noting that
nickel
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has the most dynamic pattern compared to the remaining metals. In January,
nickel
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had the biggest change in price with a 6% increase
while
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the figures for
copper
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and
zinc
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were 2% and 1% respectively. The cost of
nickel
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then
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continue to ascend by around 1% per
month
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until declined by 3% in June.
Likewise
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,
copper
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experienced a relatively similar trend, growing by between 0.5% and 2% in the first 4
months
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and
then
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falling by 0.5% in both May and June.
In contrast
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, the statistics of
zinc
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peaked at 3% in February, followed by a plunge to -3% in June. In the remaining period, the
nickel
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’s price witnessed a -1% change in 3 successive
months
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but later climbed by 1% in the 2 final
months
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.
However
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, the figure for
copper
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remained much more stable, ranging from 0.5% to 1%. At the same time, the cost of
zinc
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decreased by 0.5% each
month
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between July and September, after which it underwent a 2% growth in the
last
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month
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, zinc, month, months with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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