You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -Describe the training course you want to do -Explain what the company could do to help you -Say how the course will be useful for your job

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask for your support for a training course which can be helpful for my existing position. My name is Maria Do and I am working in the international sales department at the Vietnam branch. I have found the PSO (Problem-Solving in an Organization) course at the Ho Chi Minh Economic University relevant to my job. The course is one part of an MBA program which teaches students to find solutions to deal with all the problems that occur in a company logically and systematically. It is a six-month class which will run from June to December. As there are classes on three days at weekends, I may ask the company to let me off every Friday.

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, I wonder if the enterprise gives employees financial support on tuition fees that either fully or partly support is fine for me. As the head of the department, I am struggling with internal personnel and external customer issues every day.

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, I believe after finishing

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program, my job will be smoother. I am looking forward to receiving your response. Yours faithfully, Maria Do

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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