Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’. How to do you think this statement? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars.

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The possession of a lot of
cars
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is increasing continually in the majority of cities in the world. As
people
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have as many
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, the problem of ‘one big traffic jam’ is getting bigger in major cities. As far as I am strongly concerned, I totally agree with
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statement.
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, I believe that the mentality problem of humans is bigger than an environmental issue. From my perception, there are three main problems.
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,
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own
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for showing off self beyond transportation. Like as much as you own many
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, you are fancier or richer than other
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who do not have many
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.
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living in Seoul have many
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. On average a family of two owns three or four
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.
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, it can cause a desire for consumption, as we see as many
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on the road and street. Through that public can feel that they are
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a loser or failures without having a car. Because maybe they think, surrounding
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are buying a car and
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like the symbol of social status.
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, most of the younger
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who are having purchasing power are jealous of collecting a lot of automobiles and it is able to have an inferiority complex.
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a survey, especially younger
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are planning, to buy a car immediately after getting a first job. In my opinion, the government should control the problems directly.
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, the government can use some financial strategies
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as raising the tax rate of ownership. If someone owns many automobiles, the government would raise his tax rate. In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I totally agree with the opinion because I believe, modern society needs to change positively for individuals and associations.
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