The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps show the developments which took place on

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island

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the island

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, a comparison of the two maps reveals a change from an

island

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, which

did not have nothing

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did not have anything

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related to tourism. Before,

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the left side of the

island

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has

beach

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a beach

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, and

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the

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island

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has only

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had 12

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palms, which is not enough for

such

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large-scale islands,

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some time

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sometime

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later the

island

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experienced a number of dramatical changes. The most

noticable

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noticeable

notable

is that

nearby

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nearly

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all of

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the palms

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palms

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Palms

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built accommodations, which are huts. As can be seen from the second map.

it is clear that

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we have a pier, which

occupied

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is occupied

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by boats from both left and right sides, and we have

path

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a path

the path

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reception

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the reception

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area,

then

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path

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the path

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leads us to

restaurant

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the restaurant

a restaurant

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. From the both left and right sides of

reception

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,reception

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we have a lot of huts, which connected each other. After several works on

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the island

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island

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,island

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we have a swimming area on the beach.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

152 words

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