You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below gives information about the population of New Zealand between 2011 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below gives information about the population of New Zealand between 2011 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The table provides a breakdown by selected age group of that on population in 5 different age categories: 1) All ages; 2) Under 15; 3) 15-39; 4) 40-64; 5) 65+; of New Zealand between 2011 and 2012. The table data clearly shows that the highest percentage change was in
category
5) 65+; with +4 per cent, in 2011 in
this
category
we bore 500.000
people
, 1 year later we bore 900.000
people
,
while
in comparison with the least indicator in categories 2) Under 15; and 3) 15-39; with -0,2 per cent. In 2011 in
category
2) Under 15; we had 801.750
people
, 1 year later we had 800.000, and in
category
3) 15-39; we had in 2011 1.520.000 folk, and 1 year later we had 1.500.000 folk. As can be seen from the table, percentage change indicators were in 1) All ages; and 4) 40-64: categories with + 0,6 per cent, what I mean here is that in 2011 in
category
1) All ages; we had 4.400.000
people
,
while
in 2012 in the same
category
we had 4.460.000
people
and in
category
4) 40-64; in 2011 we honored 1.400.000
people
,
then
we honored 1.460.000
people
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words category, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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