Fewer young people play sports these days. Why is this? What can be done to encourage more young people to do sports?

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There are some
people
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who play
sports
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every day, Because of the improvement in physical
fitness
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,
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the reason for fewer
people
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playing
sports
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,
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as some elderly
people
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they cannot play some
sports
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due to
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lack of
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and old age. I want to advise young children to
exercise
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on a daily basis, because of good
health
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, and not only that it helps you to improve physical
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a decent body, and the most fun sport for children is football, and it is considered the best sport in the world, and you can become forums in future If you play every day football and you do more
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, you will grow up and may some clubs take you for the best clubs, if they like you play.
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young
people
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who do not practise
sports
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, I want to advise you to do
exercise
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because it helps you for good
health
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and distracts you from thinking about other things
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as playing mobile or PlayStation and sitting at home all day.
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, If you do not
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it will cause you rumen, Laziness, bad
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, and
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fatigue, and with time it will you get older and your body will become weak and you will regret it. to some up, I would like to say
exercise
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and avoid not exercising, Because it improves your physical
fitness
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and maintains your
health
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and is beneficial for the psychological aspect.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • engagement
  • incentives
  • obesity
  • recreation
  • well-being
  • peer pressure
  • physical fitness
  • endurance
  • balance
  • teamwork
  • coordination
  • confidence
  • self-esteem
  • discipline
  • facilities
  • accessible
  • affordable
  • curriculum
  • extracurricular
  • inclusion
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