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Fewer young people play sports these days. Why is this? What can be done to encourage more young people to do sports?

#people #sports
There are some
people
 who play
sports
 every day, Because of the improvement in physical
fitness
 ,
however
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 the reason for fewer
people
 playing
sports
,
such
 as some elderly
people
 they cannot play some
sports
due to
 lack of
fitness
 and old age. I want to advise young children to
exercise
 on a daily basis, because of good
health
, and not only that it helps you to improve physical
fitness
,
as well as
 a decent body, and the most fun sport for children is football, and it is considered the best sport in the world, and you can become forums in future If you play every day football and you do more
exercise
, you will grow up and may some clubs take you for the best clubs, if they like you play.
while
 young
people
 who do not practise
sports
, I want to advise you to do
exercise
 because it helps you for good
health
 and distracts you from thinking about other things
such
 as playing mobile or PlayStation and sitting at home all day.
Therefore
, If you do not
exercise
 it will cause you rumen, Laziness, bad
health
, and
also
 fatigue, and with time it will you get older and your body will become weak and you will regret it. to some up, I would like to say
exercise
 and avoid not exercising, Because it improves your physical
fitness
 and maintains your
health
 and is beneficial for the psychological aspect.
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  • sedentary
  • engagement
  • incentives
  • obesity
  • recreation
  • well-being
  • peer pressure
  • physical fitness
  • endurance
  • balance
  • teamwork
  • coordination
  • confidence
  • self-esteem
  • discipline
  • facilities
  • accessible
  • affordable
  • curriculum
  • extracurricular
  • inclusion
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