People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects?

Currently,
people
are connected with advertisements and these
adverts
influenced our life.
Nonetheless
, the positives of advertising are superior to the adverse
sides
. In our developing era, all
people
should live with beneficial
sides
.
First,
let’s talk about the negative aspects of advertising, there are so many adverse aspects and these adverse already affect our behaviour and mind.
Also
, many
people
have an opinion, certain
adverts
are horrible and some are ridiculous.
Therefore
, ad on TV is not as necessary. Because
people
are irritated by ads in between films or shows when
people
watch TV. If I talk about
this
more, it is not finished. Now for affirmatives of advertisement. I think it is right that advertising help to
people
when they are beginning a new own business. Advertisement is really critical even though it has adverse impacts,
however
, affirmative
sides
of advertising beat the bad effects.
For example
, many
people
prefer to promote their products on TV and boards for ads.
In addition
, with ads you have more choices. And if
adverts
have not existed in our life, it is so boring and impossible because almost everything is linked by advertising. It is always been an important part of society.
For
this
reason, we can say that advertising is necessary for our lives. All in all,
adverts
have both
sides
, but I believe that, anyway, advertising will be the winner. And
also
, without
adverts
is unthinkable
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