People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects?

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Currently,
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are connected with advertisements and these
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influenced our life.
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, the positives of advertising are superior to the adverse
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. In our developing era, all
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should live with beneficial
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.
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let’s talk about the negative aspects of advertising, there are so many adverse aspects and these adverse already affect our behaviour and mind.
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, many
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have an opinion, certain
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are horrible and some are ridiculous.
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, ad on TV is not as necessary. Because
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are irritated by ads in between films or shows when
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watch TV. If I talk about
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more, it is not finished. Now for affirmatives of advertisement. I think it is right that advertising help to
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when they are beginning a new own business. Advertisement is really critical even though it has adverse impacts,
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, affirmative
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of advertising beat the bad effects.
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, many
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prefer to promote their products on TV and boards for ads.
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, with ads you have more choices. And if
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have not existed in our life, it is so boring and impossible because almost everything is linked by advertising. It is always been an important part of society.
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reason, we can say that advertising is necessary for our lives. All in all,
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have both
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, but I believe that, anyway, advertising will be the winner. And
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, without
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is unthinkable
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer behavior
  • purchasing decisions
  • impulsive buying
  • materialism
  • economic growth
  • competition and innovation
  • personal finances
  • information dissemination
  • misleading information
  • cultural norms
  • societal values
  • diversity
  • social causes
  • stereotypes
  • unrealistic standards
  • psychological effects
  • mental fatigue
  • stress
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