the table below shows the result of a survey that asked 60800 scottish (aged 16 years and over )whether they had taen part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months

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The given table illustrates the data from an observation interview form 6800 Scottish adults divided into 4 groups (aged 16

years

and over) who participated in six kinds of cultural activities (undertaking any crafts, culture purchases, visual arts, and writing, computer-based and any performance) in the

last

year. In general, most of the adults aged 16-25

years

old participated in any performance (dancing, singing, playing a musical instrument and acting)

while

participators aged 45-74

years

old tended to choose to undertake any crafts. Turning into details it is evident that 35 % of people aged 16-24

years

old participated in any performance, and just 10 % chose computer-based.

In addition

, People aged 25-44 were attracted to dancing, singing, playing musical instruments and acting at 22 %.

On the other hand

, a proportion of adults aged 25-44

years

old were interested in undertaking any crafts just 22 %. just about 5 % of people in

this

group chose computer-based and any writing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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4 paragraphs

161 words

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