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The given pictures give information about the alterations of the ground floor of a particular building from 1959 to the present.

The given pictures give information about the alterations of the ground floor of a particular building from 1959 to the present.
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The diagrams illustrate how Youngsville in New Zealand transformed
during
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 a period of 25 years, starting
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 1980. Generally, Youngsville witnessed a significant modernization process with the most remarkable change being the replacement of residential and empty areas by industrial
as well as
 public places. Looking at the map for more details, the most noticeable alteration is that all of the trees to the south of the River Alanah were chopped down.
In addition
, houses along the railway line were demolished to make way for the construction of skyscrapers.
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 industrial zone was built with the birth of warehouses to the southeast of the school and the mushrooming of factories
while
 the airport stayed intact.
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 on to the north, a few trees still remained. The woodland
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 the North West was converted into a golf course,
whereas
 a park was added in the South and a car parking was constructed
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 the opposite side of the lake.
Moreover
, something noticeable that happened was the construction of a stadium located to the North East of the lake and the extension of the railway line from the river to the North. There was
also
 a Marina manufactured at the mouth of the river for improving the infrastructure of transportation.
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