The table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) wether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months

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The table indicates the results of the survey of 6800 Scottish adults who were interviewed in the past 12 months.

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, dancing, singing, playing musical instruments and acting had the highest number of participants,

while

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computer-based

activities

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had the least number of joiners.

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, any performance which consists of dancing, singing, playing musical instruments and acting

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mostly popular

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activities

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aged 16-44 take

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in, with 35% of

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aged 16-24 and 22% of

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aged 25-44.

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, undertaking any crafts was mostly enjoyed in the age group of 25-74, at 22%. There was

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a major number of participants aged 16-24 who took

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in any virtual art

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, at 30%. Regarding the table, there was the least percentage of

people

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aged 45-74 who took

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in any writing and computer-based

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, at 5%, and a similar percentage was for

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aged 25-44 who chose to do any writing

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. In terms of the age group of 16-24, only 10% took

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in computer-based

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and 11% chose to undertake any crafts and purchase culture.

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those

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had the lowest percentage of participants in

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age group.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

196 words

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The table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) wether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months

Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

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some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals others say that there are more important environmental problems. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.