Only rich people should donate to charity. Do you agree or disagree ?

Some folks reckon that
high
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class
crowds are the only
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ones
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who can
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donate
to
the
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charity
.
However
, I
am totally disagree
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with
this
notion. In
this
essay, I will be implementing the grounds of how mediocre and
low
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class
individuals can donate to the
charity
. At first glance, there are a plethora of ways that medal
class
individuals can help
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society.
Initially
, They can work
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a vital time
the
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community
such
as many
people
who earn low
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money
, they may be liked to work as
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volunteers for
people
who
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.
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, many
people
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to go
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nursing home as a
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volunteer
to help older seniors. A survey conducted by Indian Turbine in which
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analysed the percentage of
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voluntary
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raised
rise
in India by 12% in 2022
then
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back
black
2010.
In addition
, some mediocre masses may like to donate
small
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portion of their income to
charity
. Many Indian
middle
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class
people
like to
donete
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donate
their money especially to help
the
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homeless
people
. Many Indian mediocre
people
give
their
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10% of their income to help needy crowds. Despite
this
, many
people
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donate
their used things
such
as clothes and books to
charity
boxes.
For example
, a score of middle-
class
students can donate their books used
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the book
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to
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who
need
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the books after finishing their studies or courses. On
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controry
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contrary
, It can not be denied that
hig
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high
standard
people
can donate large
amout
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amount
amounts
of money to society
,
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if they want to do. In
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India
there
are
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numerous
actor
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actors
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,
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and billioniar
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billioniar
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billionaire
billionaires
buniessmen
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businessmen
run
the
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charity
organizations,
thus
this
a give big hand to
particular
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society. In conclusion,
Although
there is an
undenial
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undeniable
fact if we do
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something
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for
peopel
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people
who really need help, we feel happy from the core of our
heart
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hearts
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.
Therefore
,
charity
does not depend
uopn
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upon
on
the limits of
poor
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the poor
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and rich.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • philanthropy
  • broader spectrum
  • mutual aid
  • affluent
  • foundations
  • oversimplifies
  • multifaceted
  • socioeconomic
  • inclusive
  • democratizing donations
  • online fundraising platforms
  • social media campaigns
  • micro-donations
  • driving social change
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