Money manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.Do you agree or disagree?

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Finance-made

food

as well as

oral

products

consume top levels of sugars which cause major health issues these

products

should be extra costly to motivate individuals to contain low

sugar

According to

me in

this

essay I m completely disagree. To commence with ,if

food

and oral

products

contain a low level of

sugar

then

it is more beneficial for everyone To elaborate on it, if any individual wants to eat

sugar

but if every product contains a low amount of

sugar

then

it is good for everyone .The levels of

sugar

may cause a lot of diseases like diabetes, higher blood pressure, and cardiovascular diseases .

For Instance

, A survey conducted by Heath organisations in 2016 found that 73 per cent population suffer from diseases which occur

due to

sugary

products

Hence

food

and drinks manufacturing companies should have fewer quantities of

sugar

contained in these

products

Furthermore

,if these

products

will be more costly than those individuals who can not afford them it's a major loss for companies

as well as

poor people can not buy these

products

. To explain , when nobody can buy these things because of expensive it is than what they eat and drink which made of

sugar

.To cite an example, if the company made expensive

products

nobody wants to buy them.

As a result

, Do not need to make

food

and drink to be more expensive it seems to be the same.

To conclude

, Not only for health problems but

also

it is for poor individuals to buy these

products

more difficult that's why not too expensive just the level of

sugar

low

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