The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The given tables illustrate data about
sales
of fairtrade (
coffee
and bananas) in 1999 and 2004 in the
UK
,
Switzerland
, Denmark,
Belgium
, and Sweden.
Overall
,
Coffee
sales
inclined in 2004 for all countries.
However
, Bananas trade rose for
Switzerland
,
UK
, and
Belgium
. The highest
sales
of
coffee
saw by the
UK
in 2004 and Banana's highest trade was witnessed by
Switzerland
of other countries.
To begin
with, the highest trade of fair trade-labelled
coffee
was shown by the
UK
at 20
million
in 2004, the number dramatically rose from 1999, followed by
Switzerland
at 6
million
.
However
, the lowest number was in Sweden at 1
million
euros
. The third rank was Denmark, and the
last
was
Belgium
. All the numbers in 2004 increased from 1999.
In addition
,
Switzerland
's experience rose in 2004 to 47
million
euros
,
however
in 1999, the number was just 15
million
euros
.
Next,
the
UK
got 5.5
million
in
sales
. The smallest trades were seen by Denmark at 0.9
million
.
Belgium
's
sales
data shows they got 4
million
while
Sweden just got 1
million
euros
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, uk, switzerland, belgium, million, euros with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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