The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The given tables illustrate data about
sales
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of fairtrade (
coffee
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and bananas) in 1999 and 2004 in the
UK
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,
Switzerland
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, Denmark,
Belgium
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, and Sweden.
Overall
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,
Coffee
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sales
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inclined in 2004 for all countries.
However
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, Bananas trade rose for
Switzerland
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,
UK
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, and
Belgium
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. The highest
sales
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of
coffee
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saw by the
UK
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in 2004 and Banana's highest trade was witnessed by
Switzerland
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of other countries.
To begin
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with, the highest trade of fair trade-labelled
coffee
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was shown by the
UK
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at 20
million
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in 2004, the number dramatically rose from 1999, followed by
Switzerland
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at 6
million
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.
However
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, the lowest number was in Sweden at 1
million
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euros
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. The third rank was Denmark, and the
last
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was
Belgium
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. All the numbers in 2004 increased from 1999.
In addition
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,
Switzerland
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's experience rose in 2004 to 47
million
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euros
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,
however
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in 1999, the number was just 15
million
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euros
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.
Next,
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the
UK
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got 5.5
million
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in
sales
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. The smallest trades were seen by Denmark at 0.9
million
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.
Belgium
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's
sales
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data shows they got 4
million
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while
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Sweden just got 1
million
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euros
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, uk, switzerland, belgium, million, euros with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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