The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries
The table illustrates the amount of money gained in
fairtrade-labelled
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fair trade-labelled
coffee
and bananas
at
five different Change preposition
in
countries
of
European through two different time periods which are 1999 and 2004. Change preposition
in
Overall
, in 1999 the most earning country from trade
of Add an article
the trade
coffee
and bananas
are Switzerland
and UK
, respectively. Likewise
in the
2004, Change the article
apply
UK
got the biggest income Correct article usage
the UK
for
selling Change preposition
from
coffee
and bananas
among other countries
.
In 1999, the five countries
average sales Change noun form
countries'
on
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of
coffee
are below 3 millions
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million
of
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apply
euros
. Switzerland
has the highest sales for it which about
3 Add a missing verb
is about
millions
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million
euros
and the country that earn
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earns
least
money for spending Change the article
the least
this
good is Sweden with only 0.8 Change preposition
on this
millions
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million
euros
. These countries
mainly earn a lot of cash in 2004 compared in
1999 for Change preposition
to
this
trading with UK
got over twenty times higher Correct article usage
the UK
earning
to about 20 Fix the agreement mistake
earnings
million
euros
, likewise
the
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apply
Switzerland
which got doubled Correct pronoun usage
their earning
earning
to 6 Correct your spelling
earnings
million
euros
. Whereas
sales in Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden are
increased slightly to only 2, 1.7, and 1 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
euros
, respectively.
On the other hand
, for the bananas
trade. In 1999 and 2004, UK
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the UK
earning
the most compared to four other Wrong verb form
earned
countries
to
over tujuh kali Change preposition
apply
lipatnya
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lipaemia
which
about 15 and 47 Correct pronoun usage
apply
million
euros
, respectively. Meanwhile, Switzerland
and Belgium earning
in Correct your spelling
earnings
bananas
are growing significantly which
about over five times in 2004 to 5.5 and 4, respectively. Correct pronoun usage
apply
On the other hand
, Sweden and Denrmark
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Denmark
facing
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faced
andescending
tendency Correct your spelling
descending
condescending
trade
in 2004 to 1 and 0.9, respectively.Fix the infinitive
to trade
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, bananas, countries, switzerland, uk, euros, million with synonyms.
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