Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both side and give your own opinion.

It has been claimed that there should be
places
for
people
to do
graffiti
in the
city
,
whereas
another opinion states that it has to be banned. In
this
essay, I will discuss
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advantages and disadvantages of wall
pictures
in the town. A architecture and visual view of the
city
is
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an important part of our lives. The reason for
this
is that as many
people
working and living in the cities, they would like to see an appropriate view in order to have a good mood.
Furthermore
, I strongly believe, that
graffiti
can be very useful in the
city
's design.
For example
, every big
city
has
places
which are not developed for many years and probably there wouldn't be any changes in the nearest future. In
this
case, I think that
people
who are doing
the
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graffiti
can assist the
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governer
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governor
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office to make these
places
better by using beautiful wall
pictures
, especially in slum areas, and even
this
could be one of the popular tourist
destination
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in the future.
On the other hand
, if there
are
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too much
graffiti
around you, it can make you feel uncomfortable, and some
people
are not into it. For explanation, we can say that some
pictures
can make you feel sad, stressed or even rise depression.
In addition
, someone may just don't like the wall
pictures
. To summarize, in my personal opinion there should be some special
places
for
graffiti
in the
city
and it will give an opportunity to visit these
places
to
people
who is keen on it. As well it will give
a
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greater assistance in order to hide the
places
which are not in good condition.
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