The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar chart represents the estimated number of elephants that were living in a variable range of Asian countries in both 1997 and 2004.

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, With the exception of Cambodia and Laos, the number of

elephants’

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elephants

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community

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communities

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reduced between these two particular years, in other countries

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apply

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mentioned in the chart. At

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first glance it clear that these creatures’

community

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communities

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became smaller significantly in Thailand and Malaysia and the number of them

were

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almost

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doubled

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in

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7 years ago. India had the largest

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elephants

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population in 1994 and it could again occupy

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place in 2007

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it experienced a dramatic fall in numbers of

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type of animal after 7 years. Not only was not Chinese elephants’ population great big at the beginning of

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period of time, but it

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lost a considerable figure over

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time frame.

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, It can be seen that the elephants’ society in Vietnam and Laos did not encounter marked loss.

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to other asserted countries, the only place

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where

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elephants showed signs of

recovering

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recovery

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was Cambodia, where numbers may have risen by up to 200.