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The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given bar chart represents the estimated number of elephants that were living in a variable range of Asian countries in both 1997 and 2004.
Overall
, With the exception of Cambodia and Laos, the number of
elephants’
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community
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communities
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 reduced between these two particular years, in other countries
that
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mentioned in the chart. At
the
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first glance it clear that these creatures’
community
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communities
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 became smaller significantly in Thailand and Malaysia and the number of them
were
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 almost
double
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in
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7 years ago. India had the largest
elephants’
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 population in 1994 and it could again occupy
this
 place in 2007
while
 it experienced a dramatic fall in numbers of
this
 type of animal after 7 years. Not only was not Chinese elephants’ population great big at the beginning of
this
 period of time, but it
also
 lost a considerable figure over
this
 time frame.
Also
, It can be seen that the elephants’ society in Vietnam and Laos did not encounter marked loss.
Moreover
,
in contrast
 to other asserted countries, the only place
that
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where
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 elephants showed signs of
recovering
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 was Cambodia, where numbers may have risen by up to 200.
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