The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.
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growth
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birth
per woman and life expectancy in the years Use synonyms
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2000 and 2004.
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, it is evident that the Linking Words
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the three
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countries
witnessed the highest population Use synonyms
growth
in the examined periods.
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growth
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high-income
income
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, from 0.8% in 2002 to 0.7% in 2004 Use synonyms
while
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middle
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middle-income
income
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remained unchanged, at 0.9%. Use synonyms
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income
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significantly
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1.8%, leading to Change preposition
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increase
the most. Regarding the average Correct article usage
an increase
birth
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high-income
income
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kept stable, at 1.7% in the given years,Use synonyms
while
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middle
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middle-income
income
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low
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low-income
income
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decreased by 0.1 and 0.2 Use synonyms
repectively
.
The Correct your spelling
respectively
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number of
life expectancy at Correct quantifier usage
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birth
in the three country groups grew Use synonyms
drammatically
. More precisely, the figure for Correct your spelling
dramatically
in
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high
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high-income
income
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countries
was the highest and increased from 78.0 to 78.7, Use synonyms
folllowed
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followed
income
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countries
from 69.1 to 70.0 and that of low-Use synonyms
income
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countries
from 58.1 to 58.8.Use synonyms
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