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The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the
number
in
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countries
 which have different
income
 levels in terms of population
growth
, average
birth
 per woman and life expectancy in the years
of
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apply
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2000 and 2004.
Overall
, it is evident that the
number of
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life expectancy at
birth
 in
three
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the three
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 group
countries
 increased.
In addition
, low-
income
countries
 witnessed the highest population
growth
 in the examined periods. There was a slight decrease in the percentage of population
growth
 in
high
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high-income
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income
countries
, from 0.8% in 2002 to 0.7% in 2004
while
 the
figture
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figure
 for
middle
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middle-income
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income
countries
 remained unchanged, at 0.9%.
By contrast
, low-
income
countries
 saw a
significantly
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growth
to
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of
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 1.8%, leading to
increase
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an increase
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 the most. Regarding the average
birth
 per woman, the
number
 in
high
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high-income
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income
countries
 kept stable, at 1.7% in the given years,
while
 the figures for
middle
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middle-income
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income
countries
 and
low
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low-income
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income
countries
 decreased by 0.1 and 0.2
repectively
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respectively
. The
number of
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life expectancy at
birth
 in the three country groups grew
drammatically
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dramatically
. More precisely, the figure for
in
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high
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high-income
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income
countries
 was the highest and increased from 78.0 to 78.7,
folllowed
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followed
 by that of middle-
income
countries
 from 69.1 to 70.0 and that of low-
income
countries
 from 58.1 to 58.8.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 72%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, countries, income, growth, birth with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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