In the past, knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded to the internet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Previously,

knowledge

was merely existed

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in books,

however

presently,

knowledge

can be uploaded on the

internet

and can be accessible to

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and billions of people all around the world. In the following essay, I will discuss some pros and cons of uploading

knowledge

on the

internet

. One of the main benefits of releasing

information

on the

internet

is that everyone is able to access the

information

very quickly.

Internet

is made for a better social bonding that can aggregate people in the same place.

For example

, if a new substance in chemistry is discovered. It is better to be uploaded on the

internet

rather than in a book. and it is because everyone can access it instantly. Another positive

aspects

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of uploading

knowledge

on the

internet

is that the

knowledge

will be expanded in more quicker way

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in sharing

information

in books. To elaborate

this

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require

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further

observation. In

such

cases the

information

will be uploaded, allowing certain individuals who

passes

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the ability to solve the rest of the problem and contribute

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investigation. One of

downsides

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of uploading

the

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knowledge

on the

internet

is that all

information

online cannot be trusted.

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the books can be a trusted source of

information

. if

that is

the case some fact-checking organization might be established in order to check the activity on the

internet

and evaluate its validity

whether

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it is qualified to be online. In conclusion, despite the fact that sharing

knowledge

online has some benefits

such

as everyone

have

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accessibility

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toward

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online

information

. Plus, the

information

may expanded in a quicker way.

However

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there are some

downside

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of

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this

approach

such

all

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information

on the

internet

cannot be well trusted.