The graph below shows the estimated number of cars manufactured in 4 countries between 2020 and 2035.

The graph below shows the estimated number of cars manufactured in 4 countries between 2020 and 2035.
The graph illustrates the number of
cars
which are manufactured in four different countries from 2020 to 2035.
Overall
, it is evident that the
nunber
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number
of
cars
produced in China increased
while
the other countries decreased significantly in the given years. Starting at 100
thousand
cars
in 2020, it is expected that China will see a continuation of
rise
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in the number of car production to about 150
thousand
cars
after 15 years.
By contrast
, Japan was the country which manufactured the most numbers of
cars
among all in 2020 with around 350
thousand
cars
.
However
, it is predicted that
this
will reach the peak of approximately 380
thousand
cars
, which
however
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, will fall to 100
thousand
cars
by 2035.
In addition
,
although
in 2020 the figures for the USA and the UK were 300 and 200
thousand
cars
respectively, and
then
it is anticipated that these countries will share a similar decrease and will hit the bottom of under 50
thousands
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cars
by 2035.
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