Many people prefer to spend all the money they earn and not save any thing. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, more
people
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prefer to spend all the
income
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they earn and not save any thing for the
future
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.
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their negative mide set towards life they are not aware of consequences in
future
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they will face.
Firstly
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, Discussion with today's generation negative aproch towards their
future
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. Nowadays,
people
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more irresponsible they should understand how to balance and save
money
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for
future
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also
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they need to understand and most importantly value the
money
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they earn.
For example
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: Ram is earning 20,000 rupees per month and he prefer to spend all the
money
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in
future
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if any kind of situation will come he will unable tackle.
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, todays youngster have bad mind set towards
money
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saving they think they earn they can do anything they want why to take too much pressure about the
future
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.
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,
People
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should know how to save
money
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because if they save few amount from their
income
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that will help them only in
future
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. How can they save
money
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? They should study or grap the knowledge about saving
money
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they should invest some
money
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in different different growing stocks,
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have different acounts to save and secure their
future
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.
for example
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: Ram earn 50,000 rupees he has divided his
income
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several parts few amount of his
income
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he buys stocks and few amount are saved in different
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every month.
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is the positive
income
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development.
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, concluding my thoughts I understand todays
people
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has to understand the
money
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psychology because nowadays,
people
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are growing with wrong mid set. they need to respect the
money
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and use and save the
money
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for the
future
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. At
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, I would like to say "Todays you save
money
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, tomorrow
money
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will save you"
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