Our local hospital has advertised people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter •explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital •say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do •give details of when you would be available for this work

Dr Sir, I am a clinical pharmacist graduated lately working in a nearby hospital in the same town and writing

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letter to inform you of my willingness to be a part of the volunteering team that the hospital has announced before few days . I have some free time

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of wasting it on social media and skipping the posts on different apps I would like to help patients

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, I would like to have some training in the hospital. I have the ability to calculate accurate doses and supervise the dispensing of the correct drugs especially when it comes to children and the elderly.

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, I can teach training students that undergraduate. I can come every other day for about three hours

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I am working in another hospital. So I want to start my work the next week. I am looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Rafal Latif

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Jun 22, 2023

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

152 words

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