Parent, usually mothers, give up work, choose to stay home and look after families. Some people think the government should give them salary, others disagree. Discuss both and give your opinion?

Nowadays it is a common situation

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when one of the parents

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not to work, but spend most of their time taking care of their

families

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. Some people suggest that

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salary should be given

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that

persons

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,

while

others have

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opinion . In

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essay, I will overview both opinions and give my own

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conclusion.

To begin

with, taking care of a big family with two or more kids is a great job. It is necessary to make food , clean the house, wash clothes, look after children and help them with education and other things.Unfortunately, some

families

are forced to leave

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, because it is impossible for them to combine it with housework.

For instance

,

families

with small kids, who have no kindergarten or person who helps them. To deal with that issue the

government

should take some measures to help,

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benefits for that kind of

families

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or salary.

On the other hand

, if that kind of opportunity appears , the majority of people will use that chance. So, it will reduce

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of employees and hurt the economy of a country. So, the

government

should estimate who really needs help and who just

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to get money. There will be some criteria which

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to find out

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need the

governments

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support.

To conclude

, I think that taking care of family is

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hard work which should be appreciated. So, the

government

should help

families

that have no possibility to work

as well as

others. But there will be criteria

who

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really needs a benefit from

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.