The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart is about a particular country which shows how weekly
income
is spent by families in the years 1968 and 2018.
In 1968, families spent 35% of their weekly income
on food, which is, in fact, the highest expenditure over 50 years. However
, we can see that in 1968 and 2018 the least amount of money is spent on fuel and power. Furthermore
, in 2018 nearly 23% of income
is used for leisure. It can be noticed that an equal percentage of grants is spent on buying household goods
. In 2015, fuel and power as well as
personal goods
shared equal expenditure.
Overall
, in 1968 families spent a nearly equal amount of their weekly income
on household goods
, personal goods
and transport.Submitted by sku75179 on
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