The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the present layout of Islip town, and it will be developed in the future.

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, there will be extensive developments with regard to the construction of residential areas, facilities, and roads which make Islip look more modern. It is clearly seen that the countryside will be completely removed. Currently, the main

road

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runs from west to east in the middle of the town centre.

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road

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has two sides. The first leads to the school,

while

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another one leads to the park. Later, the main

road

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is to be pedestrian access, and the two sides will be expanded to a dual carriageway. The first-line shops across the

road

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will be replaced by a bus station, shopping centre, and car park.

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, other shops, the second-line shops, are unchanged. With regard to the park, some parts will be cleared to develop a new housing area. Another new housing area is built in the northeast which can access directly to the main

road

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. And, the old housing facilities will be relocated.

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, there is a plan to extend the school.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

181 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

pedestrian-only zone
dual carriageway
current
surrounded by
propose
infrastructure
bus station
car park
residential housing
traffic flow
connectivity
green spaces
recreational areas
development plans
main features
town center

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