The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The maps illustrate the present layout of Islip town, and it will be developed in the future.
Overall
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, there will be extensive developments with regard to the construction of residential areas, facilities, and roads which make Islip look more modern. It is clearly seen that the countryside will be completely removed. Currently, the main
road
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runs from west to east in the middle of the town centre.
This
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road
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has two sides. The first leads to the school,
while
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another one leads to the park. Later, the main
road
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is to be pedestrian access, and the two sides will be expanded to a dual carriageway. The first-line shops across the
road
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will be replaced by a bus station, shopping centre, and car park.
However
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, other shops, the second-line shops, are unchanged. With regard to the park, some parts will be cleared to develop a new housing area. Another new housing area is built in the northeast which can access directly to the main
road
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. And, the old housing facilities will be relocated.
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, there is a plan to extend the school.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pedestrian-only zone
  • dual carriageway
  • current
  • surrounded by
  • propose
  • infrastructure
  • bus station
  • car park
  • residential housing
  • traffic flow
  • connectivity
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • development plans
  • main features
  • town center
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