The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture below gives information about producing five different kinds of
tea
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.
Overall
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, there are three to five stages depending on each
tea
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type, which are plucking, wilting(withering), steaming, rolling and crushing, slight and full fermentation, and the
last
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part is
oven
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drying with distinct time to create
tea
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. It can be seen that all five
tea
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types are started with plucking and withering,
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handled in the
oven
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drying
at the end
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before getting the outcomes. After being wilted,
tea
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will be put in the
oven
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to be dried and turned into White
Tea
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while
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Green
Tea
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needs more stages. When withering is done,
tea
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will be moved to the steaming process. After that, it comes to a rolling step before getting in the
oven
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drying and becomes delicious Green
Tea
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. Three other kinds of
tea
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which are Oolong
Tea
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, Large
Leaf
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Black
Tea
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and Small
Leaf
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Black
Tea
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are having complicated stages. To create Oolong
Tea
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, the next part after wilting is rolling and turns to slight fermentation at a specific time, eventually moving to the general step –
oven
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drying. Basically, Large
Leaf
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Black
Tea
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and Small
Leaf
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Black
Tea
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both have the same way of production, but
while
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Large
Leaf
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Black
Tea
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has to be rolled, Small
Leaf
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Black
Tea
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goes to a different stage called crushing. After that, both are sent to the full fermentation step and
then
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put in the
oven
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drying
Change the verb form
to dry
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before giving the
last
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results.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, oven, leaf with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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