The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The picture below gives information about producing five different kinds of
tea
.
Overall
, there are three to five stages depending on each
tea
type, which are plucking, wilting(withering), steaming, rolling and crushing, slight and full fermentation, and the
last
part is
oven
drying with distinct time to create
tea
. It can be seen that all five
tea
types are started with plucking and withering,
then
handled in the
oven
drying
at the end
before getting the outcomes. After being wilted,
tea
will be put in the
oven
to be dried and turned into White
Tea
while
Green
Tea
needs more stages. When withering is done,
tea
will be moved to the steaming process. After that, it comes to a rolling step before getting in the
oven
drying and becomes delicious Green
Tea
. Three other kinds of
tea
which are Oolong
Tea
, Large
Leaf
Black
Tea
and Small
Leaf
Black
Tea
are having complicated stages. To create Oolong
Tea
, the next part after wilting is rolling and turns to slight fermentation at a specific time, eventually moving to the general step –
oven
drying. Basically, Large
Leaf
Black
Tea
and Small
Leaf
Black
Tea
both have the same way of production, but
while
Large
Leaf
Black
Tea
has to be rolled, Small
Leaf
Black
Tea
goes to a different stage called crushing. After that, both are sent to the full fermentation step and
then
put in the
oven
drying
Change the verb form
to dry
show examples
before giving the
last
results.
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