Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A number of citizens consider that producers and

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would rather take responsibility for decreasing how much packaging of products.

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others contend that

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have more impact relying on pretending to pay for much-packaged

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essay aims to discuss the logic behind viewpoints

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presents why I believe both given ideas are of equal importance, and neither should be encouraged at the expense of the other, it would rather be combined together. On the one hand, those who are in favour of the view that

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and

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are responsible for the decrease

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packaging products have their own reasoning. More specifically,

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the environment status in

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recently, it is obvious that more and more people notice

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protection,

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, if the producers have the reduction of producing packaging

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, there will be numerous highly remarkable responses from the

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, it will not only help to protect the environment but

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build a sympathetic brand’s image. Because

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are all necessary, people have to buy them undoubtedly, so

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should be produced in an eco-friendly process, including using no plastic packaging or even no packaging.

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, if there are no more packaged

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in the market, the

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absolutely can not purchase any packaged products.

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, it is understandable why others suppose that it would be better if the

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pretend to use

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with a lot of packaging. The most convincing reason is that

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can let the

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and

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cut the amount of packaging. As it is considerably hard to make the

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and

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reduce or even cut the use of packaging of commodities,

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, it is reasonable that

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have more impact on

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issue. If there is no one paying for those packaged commodities, the

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will certainly decrease or even stop manufacturing packaging, and if

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bring their own packaging, containers made from fabric or environmentally friendly materials,

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will not use any harmful packaging. In conclusion, both views have their own rationales, and they are not necessarily mutually exclusive.

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, I contend that the optimal approach should be to adopt the

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and

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’ reduction of the amount of packaging and the prevention of

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’ expenditure on commodities with lots of packaging