You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, •explain why you changed jobs •describe your new job •tell him / her your other news

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Dear John, Hope you are doing great, I am writing to inform you that I have changed my job. As you already know, I was working as a data entry operator for Joy Publications. Most of the duty in that job was manual, which I was not very fond of and they were not ready to use some software for easiness of task.

Hence

, I planned to change my job. Now, I have joined Mark and Clara Association. It is a very big organisation and every operation is streamlined. The work is organized and they are using the latest technologies in each department. I am liking the work environment here.

Also

, one more piece of news I have to give you and

that is

I am going to get married next month. I will send a separate invitation for the same with all the details. Please plan to come to the wedding. Hope to meet you soon. Warm regards, Mike

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, •explain why you changed jobs •describe your new job •tell him / her your other news

More and more people use private cars instead of taking public transport. What are the reasons for this trend? How can government encourage people to take public transport?

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