The pie charts below Show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen islands, according to a surrey of visitors.
The two pie charts compare the drawbacks
and advantages of Bowen Islands,
according to
visiting apply tourists.
Overall
, show examples of tourist
high cost of making up 50% .while
entertainment making up 25% survey of visitors.In addition
to this
,two pie of disadvantages which are called food quality and weather make up 10% and 15% respectively.Apart from that, this
pie shows information also
more advantages sides travelling anywhere.People and scenery organise 35% and 12% of all tourists area of visitors .This
figure for culture and good accommodation organise 11% and 12% respectively.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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