Many young children today leave school with a negative attitude towards learning. Why is this happening? What can be done to encourage young people to have a positive attitude towards learning?

Teenagers do not interest in learning at
school
so they leave
school
thesedays
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these days
.
This
issue is being covered by a lot of media today. In the following essay, I will discuss a couple of major causes of the issue and suggest some possible solutions to the problem. The first reason is that younger
children
can not go to
school
because they have
electronics
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machines.
For example
, my friend was preparing to
study
after he out to
school
. To be specific, he can
study
only
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Internet
such
as online courses,searching
Internet
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ect,
This
lead to enhance knowledge about much
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information.
As a result
, he passed to exams without going to
school
. Another reason is that it is hard to
study
because of having not
individual’s
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curriculum. Through
this
situation, students have
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interest in their studies. The first solution is that At
school
, they should make
school
computer labs and share various materials.
Moreover
, if the government support to more computer labs
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can search the Internet,
children
would gain knowledge anytime.
That is
, teenagers
also
have lots of information about visual things.The second solution is that
school
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make consulting for
children
after
school
.
For instance
, when my friend did
consulting
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at
school
, he thinks that he can rise confidence about doing
study
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.
This
is because he became to
study
which can
fulfill
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study
time and restore
about
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his
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parts of
study
. In conclusion, the possibility of the topic
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children
can
study
with electronic devices without going to
school
and there
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curricular
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of
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individuals.
However
, If the
school
make
school
computer labs for students to share diverse materials and make consulting
to
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childrens
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, it would be
improved
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to
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solutions
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.
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