The graph below shows the percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features in Vietnam in the year 2005,2008,2010.

The graph below shows the percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features in Vietnam in the year 2005,2008,2010.
The graph below illustrates the percentage of different phone features used by owners in Vietnam from 2005 to 2010.
It is clear that
while
the
percent
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of
users
of
Take
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photos increased, the opposite was true for Record audio and Send &
reveive
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receive
text messages.
Also
, the figure for Make Calls
were
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used by most people. In 2005, everyone who owns a phone used Make Calls in comparison with only 65%
users
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of Take
photos
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Photos
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. Over the following 5 years, the
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of
users
of Make Calls
unchanged
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after 3 years, before
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slightly to 97% in 2010.
By contrast
, the figure for
Take
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photos increased to 77% in 2010. Looking at the other features, the
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of
users
of Send & receive text messages and Record audio were similar in 2005, 82% and 78% respectively. After that, both continued to decrease significantly, at 68% and 63% for
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& receive text messages and Record audio individually in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words users with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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