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Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when it comes to news. Do you think all news true. What is the function of newspapers.

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It is often held that
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 should be free of any subjectivity. In
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 essay, I will talk about my own opinion about whether
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 is true or not
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describing
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 the main function of newspapers.  When it comes to assessing the accuracy of what is being broadcast by
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 outlets, many people think that they are not completely accurate and
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precise.
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, they believe that what we hear about a phenomenon or an incidence, is not described totally and some parts may be omitted. The reason might be an influence of affecting issues on the publications. Editors are highly influenced by political figures, economic factors and international issues.
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 how an editor can not write indiscriminately.
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, a piece of
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 can make people afraid or even force them to contest against the government,
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 authorities will control it before a disaster happens.  Newspapers can function differently ,but the main with the main purpose of publicizing the
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. In order to undertake
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 task, they should broadcast matters without any bias, especially political bias.
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,
this
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 statement makes their profession really difficult as they are under pressure and trapped between the public and governors.
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, they have to struggle for survival and they should try to be acceptable in both terms.
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, as they are being replaced by digital
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 resources, they can focus on the background of
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 rather than breaking
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. By
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 means, they can survive and gain their own popularity.  In conclusion, I really admit that
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 should be free from any subjectivity and they should discuss the truth.
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,
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 can not be achieved only by diminishing governmental intrusion.
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, since paper
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 is being substituted by digital forms, it is better for them to concentrate on the details.

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coherence cohesion
In the introduction, be explicit about your opinion on the topic and the points you will cover in the essay. The conclusion should summarize your perspective on the topic and the key points discussed.
task response
Your response should fully address all parts of the task without getting off topic. Provide a clearer stance on the topic and support it with relevant examples.
lexical resource
The essay contains a range of vocabulary, but be mindful of using precise words that accurately convey your intended meaning. Also, avoid repetition of words and use synonyms to enhance lexical variety.
grammatical range
The essay demonstrates a reasonable range of complex structures. Work on the accurate use of tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structures to enhance clarity.
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