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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ? People should read only those books that are about real events l, real people, and established facts. Use specific and details to support your opinion.

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While
 some people believe that factual
literature
 should be the only available
books
, others prefer reading fictional
novels
. I support the latter opinion because many
novels
 use true
events
 that one can relate to.
In addition
, the
literature
 form is enjoyable by itself as entertainment. Many
novels
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a
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rhetoric and
a
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poetic language making the text a piece of art. When the writer uses his or her imagination, the wording and language used can be amazing.
For instance
, the novel Faust by von Göthe and
novels
 by Edgar Allen Poe are not true
events
,
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 but give the reader excitement and joy.
Secondly
, many fictional
books
 and
literature
 are actually based on true
events
 and stories.
Such
 as episodes and happenings in the life of the author. Examples of these kinds of
literature
 are The Kite Runner,
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in Taliban's Afghanistan, and the book by Stephen King The Shining.
Moreover
, even truly fictional
books
such
 as The Lord of the Ring relate to the author's experiences in World War 1. In a nutshell,
books
 on real
events
 are important to record history.
However
, in my opinion, fictional stories are more appealing and enjoyable as the reader can relate to them and appreciate the artwork at the same time.
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