The line graph shows thefts per thousands vehicles in four European countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph below presents information about
car
thefts
in Great Britain, Sweden, France, and Canada between 1990 and 1999. The value is given in thousands.
Overall
, we see that Greait
Britain has the highest rates of vehicle Correct your spelling
Great
thefts
in the 1990s. While
France and Canada keep a steady low incidence of car
thefts
in the period, Sweden experiences and major increase.
In Great Britain
almost 18 000 vehicles were robbed in 1990. The figures fluctuated with two tops in 1992 and 1996 reaching around 20k stolen cars. Add a comma
,Britain
In contrast
, Sweden, which was the second largest country in terms of car
thefts
, kept second place,
but had a substantial increase in Remove the comma
apply
this
particular crime. From 1990 to 1999 there was a 50% increase in car
thefts
, reaching around 15 thousand missing cars at the end
of the period.
The country with the lowest stolen
vehicle in 1990 was France. Correct quantifier usage
number of stolen
However
, the figures in Canada dropped three consecutive years reaching the lowest in 1993 with less than 5000 cars reported stolen. The French also
experienced fluctuation in the number of car
thefts
; rates measuring between 6 and 8 thousand vehicles.Submitted by sayedn on
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