You are planning a 2 day work training outside your city next month.write a letter to the manager of the hotel regarding accommodation arrangement for your visit.in your letter Introduce yourself and your company. Ask Availability of their rooms. Tell him/her that your every arrangement and needs.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to reserve a

room

in your hotel express inn for two days My name is John and I am an executive chef of hotel taj lands ends. I wanted to know if there is a

room

available for two days

that is

from 15/11/2023 to 17/11/2023.

Along with

it is it possible to get a pickup service from the airport to the hotel

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Furthermore

, I want a suit

room

which is near to the elevator and has a sea view.

Additionally

, I need a single bedroom

room

. Would let me know in advance about the confirmation of the

room

? I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, John

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

114 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are planning a 2 day work training outside your city next month.write a letter to the manager of the hotel regarding accommodation arrangement for your visit.in your letter Introduce yourself and your company. Ask Availability of their rooms. Tell him/her that your every arrangement and needs.

Word Count

Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. Do you agree or disagree.

Some people think that it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems such as railways and trams. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that teenagers should always follow the example of the older people. Others believe that teenagers should question what older people say. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.