The bar chart below shows the percentage growth in average property prices in three different countries between 2007 and 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage growth in average property prices in three different countries between 2007 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of real estate values in 3 separate nations from 2007 to 2010.
It is clear that
there was an upward tendency in property prices in
China
,
while
the opposite was true for
Algeria
.
Besides
, a fluctuation was seen by
Argentina
in the observed years. As can be seen, in 2007,
Algeria
took up the largest percentage of real estate values, at over 6.0%. Meanwhile, the figure for that of
China
and
Argentina
was lower as it stood at 2.0% and 3.0% respectively. A year later,
while
Algeria
witnessed a considerable decrease to 4.5%,
China
's proportion doubled.
Likewise
,
Argentina
also
increased its property prices to nearly 5.0%. From 2009 to 2010,
Algeria
's percentage dropped by 1.5% and
then
remained stable.
However
, the total of that in
China
kept rising until it reached a peak of over 6.0% in 2010.
In addition
, after declining to approximately 1.0% in 2009, the sum of real estate values in
Argentina
climbed again to over 2.0% in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, algeria, argentina with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage growth
  • average property prices
  • economic conditions
  • real estate market
  • year-to-year growth rate
  • government policies
  • international events
  • growth trend
  • investment attractiveness
  • socioeconomic status
  • forecasting
  • infrastructure projects
  • real estate laws
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