Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People are divided into two groups based on their paradigm of whether

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children

could or could not bring their

cell

phones

to

school

.

This

essay shows both sides of each section.

To begin

with, in order to have easy communication and control over the

children

,

parents

give them

cell

phones

so that they can bring them wherever they go, even to

school

. But the action of giving

cell

phones

to

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children

creates a negative reaction from

school

officials and the teacher. Rejection by the education officer does not mean that they are angry with the parent,

children

, or both of them; it is only because they really care about the

children

's safety during the

class

hour. Giving

cell

phones

to

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children

might put them in dangerous situations. They can be a target for thieves who want to take their possessions in a violent way. Realizing

this

bad condition, the teacher and

school

officials reject the parent's

action

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. As an example, a thief can force the

children

to hand over their

cell

phones

. If the

children

try to run away or fight back, they can become victims of violations. Rejection means preventing bad things from happening to the pupil. The second reason is to keep the

children

focused in the classroom. Maybe

cellphones

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cell phones

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can distract

students

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students'

student's

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attention. The best way to prevent it is to not let them bring it to

school

during

class

hours.

On the other hand

, by having a

cell

phone,

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students can communicate easily with their

parents

. They can inform their

parents

about their

location

, which helps their father or mother come to pick them up after

school

at the correct

location

. Students who bring

cell

phones

at the same time can reduce

parents

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parents'

parent's

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worries about the safety of their

children

. As an example, if the

class

ends, the pupils can communicate with their

parents

to

come

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pick them up in their exact

location

by sharing their

location

with each other.

This

is the positive side of bringing a

cell

phone.

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a

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conclusion, I prefer

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that

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children

could bring their

cell

phones

with them even to

school

. The

school

official and the teacher can collect the

children

's

phones

and return them to them after

class

.

This

is a good idea that can be implemented.