Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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children

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could or could not bring their

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phones

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to

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essay shows both sides of each section.

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with, in order to have easy communication and control over the

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,

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give them

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so that they can bring them wherever they go, even to

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. But the action of giving

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creates a negative reaction from

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officials and the teacher. Rejection by the education officer does not mean that they are angry with the parent,

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, or both of them; it is only because they really care about the

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's safety during the

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hour. Giving

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might put them in dangerous situations. They can be a target for thieves who want to take their possessions in a violent way. Realizing

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bad condition, the teacher and

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officials reject the parent's

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. As an example, a thief can force the

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to hand over their

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phones

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. If the

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try to run away or fight back, they can become victims of violations. Rejection means preventing bad things from happening to the pupil. The second reason is to keep the

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focused in the classroom. Maybe

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can distract

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attention. The best way to prevent it is to not let them bring it to

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during

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hours.

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, by having a

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phone,

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students can communicate easily with their

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. They can inform their

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about their

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, which helps their father or mother come to pick them up after

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at the correct

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. Students who bring

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phones

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at the same time can reduce

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worries about the safety of their

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. As an example, if the

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ends, the pupils can communicate with their

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to

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pick them up in their exact

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by sharing their

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with each other.

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is the positive side of bringing a

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phone.

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conclusion, I prefer

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children

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could bring their

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phones

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with them even to

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. The

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official and the teacher can collect the

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's

phones

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and return them to them after

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is a good idea that can be implemented.