You have been experiencing problem with the local transport. Write a letter to the manager of the public transportation service and say: -How have you used the local public transport? -What problems have you experience? -Suggest how they can improve the service

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the local transport. I am John I use public transport frequently. Nowadays I am facing a lot of issues. The bus is not time.
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, the bus is overcrowded and the a/c temperature is high . As you know it is winter the a/c should be low.
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, the bus and the local train are dirty, which requires more cleaning .
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, some of the ticket counters are closed because of that reason the queue is long and
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more during the weekend. I would like to suggest adding some more buses at the weekend. Yours faithfully, John
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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