The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site
The given maps present a comparison between the current Norbiton industrial area and the planned site development.
Overall
, there are several buildings to construct on
this
site. As of now, farmland is separated from the rest of the town. It is planned the future that they will construct a bridge and a
road
on the banks of the river
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so that people will have easier access to cross. In order to do so, they are going to have to relocate a housing which blocks the future
road
that will link the bridge and the current roundabout.
Moreover
, soon a smaller roundabout will be made in order to control the traffic in the southern T-section.
Furthermore
, there will be some new buildings which have their own purposes. If the residents want to buy something, they can find it in the shops, located southwest of the roundabout. On the other side of the
road
, there will be a medical centre. On
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eastern side, they will have a playground for the children, situated between the two housings near the river bank. Not very far from there, a school is going to be built
at the end
of the
road
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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