It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Work-

life

balance

means making a

balance

between your work and your

life

. Many people argue that

life

balance

requires our

life

to enjoy more and live as a happy person.

While

, others think that if someone wants to increase his fingerprint for humanity, he should give himself completely to his carrier or to his passion. I completely accept acting as a main actor in our daily work because we have only one

life

and we must try hard in order to expand our impact on humanity. On the one hand, normal people have a simple

life

, eats, acts, and works like

normal

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person

as well as

makes a

balance

between the thing that they want to do and their daily routines.

For example

, normal people work about 6-8 hours per day to achieve a salary for continuing their

life

and enjoying it.

On the other hand

, the person who carries a very good message and wants to make a huge thing for human beings

,

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needs to sow seeds that benefit others. And it is not easy, it requires a human hardworking.

For instance

, if you become an actor in a movie, and you are one of the main actors, you should act like a battle, and

instead

of working 8 hours, you have to spend the whole of your time

for

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sending your message properly. In conclusion, our lives are under our decisions. We can choose a normal balanced

life

and enjoy more in

life

or forget

life

balance

and try hard,

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all of our time working to make seeds that benefit humans.